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somewhere in Camlica . . .

Thank you `mnoo for suggesting and `suzi9mm for choosing this as DD !

the other parts of this series :

HIDE [link]
RAIN [link]
STYLE [link]
SNOW [link]
RETRO WIND [link]

for

FROZEN
COLD
RECESS
REVERIE
LOVE
BREATH
EMPTINESS ,

see : '08 Calendar [link]
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Given 2005-09-01
Wind by ~GeorgeHarrison ( Suggested by mnoo and Featured by suzi9mm )
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I really enjoy this piece. It's a great example of minimalism that often isn't seen in deviations nowadays. A great capture of motion, and your decision to use Black and White really helped here with the contrast of light and dark.

My biggest issues would be the concept as a whole and just a few minor technical details. While it is done well by comparison to other pieces, I do find the idea of a "lone window against a stark wall" to be a little overdone at this point. One the whole, it works here because of the fluttering and tone choice, but there have been more original choices.

It also seems ever so slightly tilted. I can't tell if it's the way the window was built or not, but the top edge is definitely not parallel to the top of your frame. The bottom line isn't as harsh, so it's a little less noticeable. It by no means ruins the picture or anything, but it's there nonetheless. I'm also a little conflicted about the wall as a whole. The window itself has this great contrast with definite shadows and depth. However, it tends to make the wall completely flat by comparison. It's probably much richer in tone on a large print, but for internet viewing it's almost distracting.

Again, on the whole a wonderful piece that really stood out among the others when browsing that really only has some minor details that could be tweaked. Great job!
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lomatic Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Fantastic!
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leoatelier Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014   General Artist
Great :clap:
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LEONARDOBRASIL Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
Wooooow.
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DVanDyk Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
simplicity is so special
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Canankk Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
Featured in my journal www.deviantart.com/journal/Mel… :iconarrheartplz:
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longtimedyin Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Nice colorz kardeş yüksek çözünürlüklüsü yok mu?
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FelisFather Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Simple, elegant.
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Em-S5 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Photographer
So simple! I love it!
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farcry77 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This shot made me say wow
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GeoLPhotography Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
great
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:icondeepresonance:
deepresonance Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Well done!
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:iconeinsilbig:
Einsilbig Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
What a wonderful shot!!! :love:
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:iconcrh:
crh Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
instant fav
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thanksthatisenough Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Nice photo -:)
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dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Hello.
You have been featured in my latest Square-feature.
Please check it out and give it a favourite if you liked it.
Have a lovely upcoming week! :huggle:
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YoungAngrySpoon Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Writer
Hello! I love your image and have used it to illustrate a book review I have written at [link]. I have given you credit at the bottom of my post, if you have any problems please let me know and I will change it/not use it as sufficient! Thank you.
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skepticaldream Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
paper tissue box
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:iconmst-photography:
mst-photography Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Professional Photographer
Its so simple and still so strong. Love the silence. Great work.
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PictureFairytale Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing.
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:iconfulyaa:
FulyAA Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Student Photographer
esti
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TheFulkrum Featured By Owner May 23, 2011
featured

[link]

:)
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serpentine-eyes1994 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011
Love the simplicity. You have a good eye. :heart:
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Sms1eve Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
Bizar and effin' good,
I love it
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AbdoHad Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
amazing work !!
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:iconcoolykinz:
coolykinz Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010
nice
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mahliadahlia Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010
featured [link]
credit and link to you c:
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:iconmuhalovka:
Muhalovka Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
awesome shot
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:iconalperyesiltas:
alperyesiltas Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010
thank you (:
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:iconmuhalovka:
Muhalovka Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010
good ol' you're welcome
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prickly89 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
It feels peaceful and airy, as though good things are coming. :+favlove:
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:iconalperyesiltas:
alperyesiltas Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
:donut:
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ArtByCher Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010   Traditional Artist
Perfection!
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:iconalperyesiltas:
alperyesiltas Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010
thank you (:
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whiteheaveneleven Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010  Student General Artist
Wow! what a beautiful picture :clap:
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:iconalperyesiltas:
alperyesiltas Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2010
thanks a lot (:
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ElenaCute Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
[link] featured :iconeufrosis:
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:iconalperyesiltas:
alperyesiltas Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010
thank you very much :coffeecup:
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ElenaCute Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
No problem :heart:
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:iconalbiona:
Albiona Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Professional General Artist
I love it! The textures, the shades, the simplicity, everything.

:+fav:
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:iconalperyesiltas:
alperyesiltas Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010
thank you very much ;)
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Mittens12th Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
I enjoy work very much. Thank you :)
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alperyesiltas Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
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thx a lot for lots of faves
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Mittens12th Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010
You are quite welcome. It's really beautiful and .. inspiring ^^
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:iconeggbird:
eggbird Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
simple yet beautiful... it's a wonderful piece!
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:iconalperyesiltas:
alperyesiltas Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010
thank you very much ;)
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gingersfunkyphotos Featured By Owner May 2, 2010   Photographer
Just thought I'd let you know that you and your work are an inspiration to me. I have featured you here. [link]
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:iconalperyesiltas:
alperyesiltas Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
thank you very much ;)
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gingersfunkyphotos Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   Photographer
You are so very welcome. I thank you for sharing your image with us.
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c31marius Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010   General Artist
It inspires me like it would be one of those summer afternoons when the wind blows less, when it's not too hot nor too cold, when time seems to have stopped a little... I am very impressed!
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alperyesiltas Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010
thank you very much :coffeecup:
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